Thank you!!!

It does? I didn't know that. Well, there much more to come, so don't worry. It gets even better from here.....WOOT!!

(You mean the theme songs from the series, right? You could, but I think my friend already has all the songs, knowing her....)

I think fast-paced is good in a book, as it keeps the reader engaged. A fellow author who does this is James Patterson who is an awesome writer.

But too fast-paced is bad, yes. You get lost and confused easily.

However, I think it's good. More description maybe, but that's just me.

Maybe it would be better if you wrote a sequel instead of packing everything into 1 book.

I couldn't tell before if it was fast-paced or not, but now that I look at it, it does seem a little too fast. Great, more editing to do for this book, and I thought I was done with it....

Not everything is just in this book alone. This one is just focusing on bringing and figuring out the antagonist's main purpose in the series. There will be five books in total, and each book has a new focus to the overall series.

No one gets it right the first time. Loads of editing is good though. Maybe you should take a break and then come back. That way, you can see all the mistakes and stuff you need to improve on.

Oh that's cool. Another chapter up maybe?